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Ryuu the Eastern Dragon, Version 5.0 Now in BD Labs

Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2015 7:15 pm
by ShyDragon
Link to Labs Here.

Okay so, yeah this is an idea I’ve had swimming around in my head for a while. Please forgive my mediocre skills in digital art and Zbrush, I’m not the best at it. In fact someone else is probably going to have to smooth out some things on my model, as I don’t really know all the ins and outs of Zbrush tools.

The concept for the toy STAYS. Long and smooth. No harsh texture, no girthy knots.

The idea is smooth and long, like an eastern dragon.


Dimensions are similar to Chance the Stallion, maybe a little thicker.

--Small--

Total Length: 7.5 to 8 Inches
Usable length: 6.5 inches
Diameter at thickest: 1.8
Circumference at thickest(bulges and head): 5.5

Not entirely sure where to scale up from here.



Here is Ryuu 5.0, I made the bulge at the bottom a bit larger and made him a bit rounder overall, though it's a bit hard to tell.


Ryuu5Title.jpg


Ryuu5Angles.jpg





Here are some colors on the new model.


Ryuu5Colors.jpg



Old Versions

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Fun fact, according to my research “Ryuu” is a Japanese name that means dragon.

Here is some character art I made. Like I said, a bit rough but it gets the point across.

RyuuSketchArt.jpg


Here is a little story I've written along with the toy and character art.

Ryuu the Eastern Dragon

Many rumors surrounded the calm river that flowed through the mountain forest. Those who have taken the river’s path through the moonlit night nearly always return with a smile on their face and a story to tell, describing a long, smooth texture and a most pleasurable feeling within its waters. However, while all their stories were similar, nobody spoke of the details of why or how such a river could bring such happiness. That is why you’re here, traveling through the dark forest in the middle of summer in the dead of night on the bank of the very river that spawned so many stories.

So far…you’ve been completely disappointed. True, the river was beautiful, the water tasted refreshing and it’s rippling flow felt cool and soothing to the touch but it didn’t seem any more spectacular than any other river. What was all the fuss about? It made absolutely no sense. After walking for hours and gaining nothing but sore feet, wet socks and sweaty clothes, you decide a short break is well deserved and walked towards the water’s edge.

Kneeling by the stream, you cup some of its water and splash it on your face, trying to clear your head. After clearing your eyes of water you glance up to see the rippling glow of the moon reflected on the water’s surface. You pause and stare. There seemed to be two moons reflected on the water, one small moon and one very large moon. Suddenly the second reflection began to move. The rippling round shape began to elongate and wind its way towards you. Frightened, you jump and stumble back, landing heavily on your hands and attempt to crab-crawl backwards but the slope of the bank was too steep. Feeling trapped, you stare at the long glowing shape on the water, which was now stretched across the water and didn’t move.

Watching the edge of the water where the shape was closest, you noticed what looked like a pair of eyes staring up at you. The water rippled furiously as something began to rise to the surface. The large head of a dragon rose from the water and stared at you curiously. Its silver-white scales shined as bright as the moon, which you realize was the reason for the second reflection on the water. You can feel your heartbeat pounding, feeling both amazed and afraid.

“You’re a new face.” The dragon said in an enthusiastic, unmistakably male voice. Your eyes widen at his words. “My name is Ryuu. What brings you to these wilds?” he asked.

“I...I came here to visit the river.” you respond clumsily.

“It’s wonderful, isn’t it?” Ryuu said happily, raising his head higher, exposing more of his very long neck. Ryuu suddenly wheeled his head to the side and plunged into the water. His neck followed his head’s path like a long rope. After a moment his silvery head rose from the surface again. “I come here often as well, it’s my favorite place to be. You’ll love it too.” He said before playfully diving into the water again. Ryuu continued in this manner for several moments. You feel content to just sit and watch as his long body rose and fell like wheels in the water. “I especially love it when friends come to visit.”

Standing, you attempt to brush some of the dirt and mud from your clothes. “Actually I came here because of all the stories.” You mention truthfully.

“Stories?” Ryuu asked in a somewhat half-interested manner as he swam to and fro.

“Yes, I’ve heard so many people tell stories about this river.” You explain, “They keep saying that when they visited this river it felt amazing and pleasurable.”

At this Ryuu paused in his playful swimming to look at you intently. “Pleasurable?” He said, tilting his head like a dog.

“Yes, pleasurable.” You repeat, “Meeting you was a nice change of pace but as far as the river goes…uh” you stutter when you notice Ryuu was almost at the riverbank again. “…As far as the river goes…I don’t understand what they’re talking about.” You say shakily as Ryuu put a clawed foot onto the muddy bank. With a gulp you stand very still. The dragon seemed much bigger up close.

“That seems a bit vague…” Ryuu said in a gentle, almost teasing tone of voice. “Do they say anything else?” He asked, stretching his head to your hand. With his snout he pushes your hand up and slid his head underneath it in a way that reminded you of a cat wanting to be pet. You feel more relaxed by the gesture.

“Um…they say that the river feels long and smooth…but not much else.” You stammer as Ryuu’s neck began to gently slide around your back in something akin to a serpentine hug. A soft chuckle escaped from Ryuu. You shiver as his warm breath hit your cheek.

“Are you sure they’re talking about the river?” He asked before nuzzling his snout to your neck. You can only stare at him, confused. Ryuu continued to walk around you in a large circle until the rest of his body was out of the water. As his back legs clambered up the bank you notice something rising up from between them. In the dark you could hardly see it, knowing only that it was very long and very large. It was only when the large mass was within reach that you finally realized what it was.

It was Ryuu’s cock standing stiff and very ready. Rivulets of water ran down the smooth ripples in its shaft and all you can do is stare. You feel a sudden urge to touch it. Reaching out you run your fingers over the slight bulge of its head. As you run your hand down the long, smooth shaft you hear a low breathy purr from Ryuu. Ryuu began to walk towards the water, his body trailing past you until his tail gently curls around your waist. As Ryuu entered the river his tail guides you to the water insistently. You blush furiously and your heart begins to pound again, but this time for an entirely different reason.



Well, that's my idea. Let me know what you think.

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon

Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2015 7:29 pm
by Chibity
Oooo, yes yes yes~ BD definitely needs some more toys in the smooth-length department. Something with no pronounced texture/bumps, but just lovely curves and tapers from beginning to end. My only suggestion is that the base might be a little small for it to easily stand on its own. At least, something big enough to have a well-supporting suction cup for all that length would be a nice size for a base. Maybe getting some belly scale details or folds in there would look nice, too!

Great works so far, love the character art :D

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon

Posted: Wed Jul 08, 2015 10:24 pm
by nevan
Chibity wrote:Oooo, yes yes yes~ BD definitely needs some more toys in the smooth-length department. Something with no pronounced texture/bumps, but just lovely curves and tapers from beginning to end. My only suggestion is that the base might be a little small for it to easily stand on its own. At least, something big enough to have a well-supporting suction cup for all that length would be a nice size for a base. Maybe getting some belly scale details or folds in there would look nice, too!

Great works so far, love the character art :D


I agree with all of this! The lack of less textured toys without knots is rather irritating, and I love how the shaft looks! Chibity brings up a very valid point with the base needing to be a tad bigger in proportion, though. Everything else about this is lovely, though!

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon

Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2015 2:59 am
by ShyDragon
nevan wrote:
Chibity wrote:Oooo, yes yes yes~ BD definitely needs some more toys in the smooth-length department. Something with no pronounced texture/bumps, but just lovely curves and tapers from beginning to end. My only suggestion is that the base might be a little small for it to easily stand on its own. At least, something big enough to have a well-supporting suction cup for all that length would be a nice size for a base. Maybe getting some belly scale details or folds in there would look nice, too!

Great works so far, love the character art :D


I agree with all of this! The lack of less textured toys without knots is rather irritating, and I love how the shaft looks! Chibity brings up a very valid point with the base needing to be a tad bigger in proportion, though. Everything else about this is lovely, though!


Thank you for your input. It means a lot.

A larger base will definitely be added. I think some small folds near the base would look okay but I don't want too many textures out on the shaft. Belly scales sound cool but it would make the toy look less smooth. Unless you mean belly scales on the base, of which Ryuu has none. If I put any more "texture" in, it must be large and long, just like the "pseudo-knot" that flows from just behind the head and down the entire shaft.

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon

Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2015 4:53 am
by Chibity
ShyDragon wrote:A larger base will definitely be added. I think some small folds near the base would look okay but I don't want too many textures out on the shaft. Belly scales sound cool but it would make the toy look less smooth. Unless you mean belly scales on the base, of which Ryuu has none. If I put any more "texture" in, it must be large and long, just like the "pseudo-knot" that flows from just behind the head and down the entire shaft.


Oh- yes, any and all textures that I was referring to would just be decorative things on the base. Something that makes it looks more like a real surface and not just a pedestal for the phallus to sit on. Doesn't have to be super detailed either~

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon

Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2015 6:13 am
by ShyDragon
Chibity wrote:
Oh- yes, any and all textures that I was referring to would just be decorative things on the base. Something that makes it looks more like a real surface and not just a pedestal for the phallus to sit on. Doesn't have to be super detailed either~




Ah, ok. My mistake. Ryuu's belly is smooth so some folds may work. But before I add that, how does the base look now? I added in the new pic of the enlarged base.

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon

Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2015 6:54 am
by Chibity
ShyDragon wrote:Ah, ok. My mistake. Ryuu's belly is smooth so some folds may work. But before I add that, how does the base look now? I added in the new pic of the enlarged base.


Yess, that's a great size for the base! Really coming along well with the shape, too ^O^

Out of curiosity, were you thinking of attempting some colour schemes on it? If you ever needed help with that, I'd be more than happy to do some for you. I can easily work with the pictures you've already provided.

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon

Posted: Thu Jul 09, 2015 6:57 am
by ShyDragon
Chibity wrote:Yess, that's a great size for the base! Really coming along well with the shape, too ^O^

Out of curiosity, were you thinking of attempting some colour schemes on it? If you ever needed help with that, I'd be more than happy to do some for you. I can easily work with the pictures you've already provided.


I have some color schemes in mind. But I'm prioritizing the shape of Ryuu right now. I'd like some more feedback and make some small changes if need be. Color will come last.

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon

Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2015 5:35 pm
by ShyDragon
Version 2 is now here.

RyuuTheEasternDragonVersion2.jpg


The more feedback I get the more likely i'll make changes. Let me know what you guys think.

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon, Version 2 is out.

Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2015 6:23 pm
by Zeniverica
I've been wanting a toy that's long but not a horse this is perfect in so many ways I neeeeed it!
Only suggestions I have is it looks flat needs a bit more girth and the base looks plain, could use some detailing. It is a smooth dragon though so maybe a different shape to the base to make it more interesting.

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon, Version 2 is out.

Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2015 7:07 pm
by Steambirds
I like the really wavy design of the shaft, it's very neat! But as zeniverica suggested, maybe some detail on the base would be better. Though, what kind of color(s) would we expect for this toy?

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon, Version 2 is out.

Posted: Fri Jul 10, 2015 7:49 pm
by ShyDragon
Zeniverica wrote:I've been wanting a toy that's long but not a horse this is perfect in so many ways I neeeeed it!
Only suggestions I have is it looks flat needs a bit more girth and the base looks plain, could use some detailing. It is a smooth dragon though so maybe a different shape to the base to make it more interesting.


Well the shaft is supposed to be smooth and thin, like an eastern dragon, like Ryuu. I'm trying to think of ways to make the base better, Ryuu's belly is smooth with no belly scutes or scales so I'm not sure what to put in besides some folds.

I like the really wavy design of the shaft, it's very neat! But as zeniverica suggested, maybe some detail on the base would be better. Though, what kind of color(s) would we expect for this toy?


I'll be adding color later but the exclusive color will be a silvery color I'd like to call "moonlit stream".

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon, Version 2 is out.

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 9:19 am
by ShyDragon
After some thought I decided to add a bit more form to the underside of the shaft so that it doesn't look so bare. I also added some more pronounced folds on the base and some light detail near the bottom of the shaft to make it look more fleshy.

I need some feedback, does it work?


Ryuu2.jpg


Here is the old version.

RyuuTheEasternDragonVersion2.jpg


Which one looks better?

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon, Version 2 is out.

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 10:52 am
by stuck-on-the-knot1
ShyDragon wrote:After some thought I decided to add a bit more form to the underside of the shaft so that it doesn't look so bare. I also added some more pronounced folds on the base and some light detail near the bottom of the shaft to make it look more fleshy.

I need some feedback, does it work?


Ryuu2.jpg


Here is the old version.

RyuuTheEasternDragonVersion2.jpg


Which one looks better?

The new version looks great! You did a nice job on the base and the underside looks more friendly!~ I would love to see this be made in the BD lineup! :smile:

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon, Version 2 is out.

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 9:21 pm
by ShyDragon
stuck-on-the-knot1 wrote:The new version looks great! You did a nice job on the base and the underside looks more friendly!~ I would love to see this be made in the BD lineup! :smile:


Yes I think the shape is done for the most part. If I do add anything else to the toy's shape it will likely be very small.

Now for color. Here is what I was thinking.

RyuuColor.jpg


What do you think?

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon, Version 2.5 is here, Colors too!

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 9:25 pm
by Chibity
Aw man, Moonlit Stream is gorgeous~ Loving how far you've managed to take this design!

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon, Version 2.5 is here, Colors too!

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 9:48 pm
by ShyDragon
Chibity wrote:Aw man, Moonlit Stream is gorgeous~ Loving how far you've managed to take this design!


I'm happy to finally get it off my chest. I regret not sharing this sooner. It won't be long before I submit it to the labs.

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon, Version 2.5 is here, Colors too!

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 10:13 pm
by Steambirds
I think the moonlit stream should fade from a metallic silvery color to the blue, but that's just me.

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon, Version 2.5 is here, Colors too!

Posted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 10:16 pm
by ShyDragon
Steambirds wrote:I think the moonlit stream should fade from a metallic silvery color to the blue, but that's just me.


I agree that a fade would look nice but the metallic silver highlight over the dark blue is supposed to look akin to the moon reflected on ripples in a stream, hence it's name, which is also an innuendo for ejaculation.

Re: Ryuu the Eastern Dragon, Version 2.5 is here, Colors too!

Posted: Fri Jul 17, 2015 6:54 pm
by ShyDragon
While I see that more people voted for "looks good but needs some work" option I'd like to know what exactly needs to be worked on. I'd like to be sure that this toy is ready before I put it up in the labs.